Please check out my new poem on my DA page (click here), the title is The Inevitable End. It's my 9th poem and I hope that you can give me your comments or suggestions (just tell it in a nice way please... XD)
I think I'll place my 1st four lines here: (if you need sample)
The days pass such as people do,
Limitless time that comes and goes;
Unbreakable destiny that twists too,
Foretells passing friends and coming foes.
By the way, my 8 previous poems are also there on my DA page, so please feel free to check them out, thanks...
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