Yes, I know, you all might think that I've made another poem. Well you're all half damn right if you thinked like that. This poem, The Will of Existence (click here), is my first ever poem made, not The Death of the Dearest One. I've always been aware of that, it just happened that I lost the poem 2 years ago, and good thing that I found it about yesterday. I only found the draft though (in yellow paper), I couldn't find the printed one. Oh well, at least I found something rather than nothing.
Anyways, this poem is actually 2 poems, the older one is the original 2007 version, while the revised 2009 version is the 12th poem that I made as of now.
This poem served as my stepping stone to poetry and without it, I couldn't possibly discover my talent for poetry. Anyways enough talk cause I bet your itching to see the preview of this old friend of mine:
A lifetime beneath the walls,
Decisions limited within the halls.
Trapped within a frozen chamber,
Which none could ever hinder.
Please check it out and tell me what you think about it, but don't pm me if all your going to do is throw useless insults. Thanks...
1 comment:
Hey, that sounds nice. Can I take that and pass it to Atsi Catherine? You haven't given me your poem yet, you know. I know that you might be angry that I won't take all your works to pass to Atsi Catherine but I wanted to pass the works of others as well. I wanted the readers to see different styles of writing. Yours is excellent but others also have their poems that they might want to share. You're not the only excellent poet around here. I hope you take that into consideration. I bear no ill-feelings towards you. I just wanted you to see my reason, that's all. I really hope you understand. Thanks. I'll be expecting your work or don't bother if you're too mad at me. I'll understand. Not that you have to care. I'm very sorry if I have offended you.
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