11/26/2009

Time...

Just got bored so I wrote my 21st poem today, Time (click here). To be honest, I'm somewhat troubled by this poem's quality of words, I don't think that they are good enough, but I guess other people might have their own opinions. So I'll place it for the public and I hope that you like it.

"Being hated by one doesn't mean your despised by the majority."

The preview:

Sounds of tick tock tick tock,
Time that walks with the hands of clock.
Revolving of the gears hast made me think,
Of the wonders thou hast made all link.

So there you have it, please check the rest out at my DA, if you think that I'm wrong with my opinions towards this poem, I'll be happy to read/hear your comment/s. Thanks... XD

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