1/10/2010

Love Can't Betray...

Alright, so if you checked out my 25th poem, Love's Judgement, then that means you'll know this one. This poem, Love Can't Betray (click here), is my partner's (Charmaine Guy's) reply to my poem. I really have to say that she really did a great job since I really liked the construction of the poem. (even if it was a rejection, hehehe, never would you see such a beautiful rejection in your whole life) Everything you're going to see is her original work except for the title, which I have given since she asked for my opinion towards it.

So, without further ado, the preview:

Valor was you in expressing yourself,
Astute in words in meaning you have dealt.
Special person you may be to me,
In only as a friend, a best friend really first.

All right so that is the preveiw, please check it out on my DA, and please comment, I'll let her know of your opinions regarding this poem. Thanks...

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